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Synopsis: Della Myers is an overwhelmed upper-middle-class housewife who lives in a large house in the suburbs with her twin children and her abusive husband, Kenneth. Kenneth lets Della know that he thinks she gives all her attention to the twins and neglects her house and her appearance. Late on Christmas Eve, Della drives to the local mall to buy gift-wrap. While searching for a parking space in the jam-packed lot, Della notices an old car taking up two spaces. Frustrated and annoyed, she decides to leave a paper message on the windshield of the old car, writing, "Hey, 'Jack'. How selfish can you be?" After the mall closes, Della's car is held by the driver of the old car and she is threatened by four punks -- Chuckie, Huey, Vingh, and Tomás. When the security guard of the mall attempts to protect Della, he is shot and killed by Chuckie. Della tries to escape from the criminals in her truck, but the gang chases her. In the chase, she crashes in a nearby forest. What unfolds in the woods is De
Genre: Crime, Drama, Thriller
Director(s): Susan Montford
Production: Anchor Bay Entertainment
 
IMDB:
4.8
Metacritic:
40
Rotten Tomatoes:
31%
R
Year:
2008
86 min
Website
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Right, Chuckie?

"Chuckie"? Is that for real?

At least your parents

have a sense of humor.

I don't have any parents.

I named myself.

Do you have a beef

with us, honey?

Because slipping a note

underneath my wipers...

is an invitation to war

to me and my soldiers.

If you hadn't have parked

like an a**hole...

we wouldn't be standing here.

- Watch your mouth!

- Get away from me!

You're just digging

your grave deeper.

- Where you going?

- F*** you!

- F*** you.

- No, f*** you!

Any trouble here, ma'am?

Not if these punks

move their car!

What's the deal, Barney Fife?

Okay, boys. Back your car up

and let the lady out.

How does that sound, squirt?

We're not in the mood.

In fact...

mind your f***ing business,

and go direct some traffic.

I'm going to make

this my business.

Now, why don't you pile back

into your piece-of-sh*t car...

and get the f*** out of my mall?

Did you hear what I said?

Did you hear me?

Did you hear me, daddy?

Get out of here!

- Put the gun down.

- Get out of here!

- Put the gun down!

- I said, get out of here!

- Put the gun down!

- You want me to put it down?

Make me, b*tch!

I said...

- Sh*t.

- Motherf***er.

She's getting away!

F***, man! She's probably

on the phone with 5-o already!

- We're going to go down for this!

- Don't worry about it, nigga.

Don't call me "nigga".

You ain't the right. None of you.

Take it easy, Huey.

Take it easy.

We got this.

The world is our b*tch.

Get in the car.

Now.

Move over, Tomas!

Come on!

- The cop went down hard.

- Goddamn it, Tomas. Shut up!

My God.

Oh, God.

Hell, no.

- Damn!

- What?

My new Keds are all dirty!

Get there and push!

The car's got nowhere to go.

The road ends there.

There's nothing

but houses and trees.

Ditch the car, man.

We've got a witness on the loose.

Trust me.

You won't hear a peep from her.

She's going down, execution style.

What if she's gone already?

She's not gone.

There's no place for her to go.

Damn. She took out that barrier.

It's going to be impossible to

find her, even if she is around.

Come on, guys.

Maybe we can hotwire the truck.

I'll find you now, c*nt!

We caught up in this

like it's a soap opera.

We need to blast out of town,

act like we were never around.

- Vingh, get over here.

- How much "Kill" you been smoking?

Come on, man. No one cares

about a f***ing Rent-A-Pig!

He's just collateral damage

to the people at the mall.

She's the only witness!

If we hit the road right now...

w could be miles away

before they find out.

We could be swimming in the

Atlantic, like you promised me.

Huey, come here.

Come here.

Remember how I broke

you out of that home?

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Edward Bryant

Edward Winslow Bryant Jr. (August 27, 1945 – February 10, 2017) was an American science fiction and horror writer sometimes associated with the Dangerous Visions series of anthologies that bolstered The New Wave. At the time of his death, he resided in North Denver. more…

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