Total western

Synopsis: After a drug deal gone wrong, Bédé goes into hiding in the countryside at a reformative school for criminal youth. His location is found out, and he and the pupils have to protect themselves with whatever means they have.
84 min


Hi, Bdcarrax!

Why you think I'm here?

Come on...

Why you think I'm here?

Don't know. Why?

You still havent got the cell?

Would be easier to catch you

You were looking for me? -Bergosa

wants to meet you tomorrow

Don't be late. He'll be

playing golf after that

Wake up, it's not night,

work is waiting..

It's too early. - Not too early for

the cock so not for us either

The last one cleans the toilet

Show that damn cock a few

tricks so it will sing less

Kamel, last one down cleans the...

Shut up. I warned you not to

irritate me in the mornings

At least that one is a rule

I won't be the last

Kristelle has been excused.

- Why? Me too...

I can take heroin too if I get

excused that way

My brother been a narc allready

ten years...

Live him alone and do what u

were told

You should be in North Africa

dressed up like a arab

C'mon, make me wear that one.

- What you think you doing?

Ah, The Addams family coming

Kristelle, Kamel wants to talk

You whining? - Shut up and

stop acting gay

C'mon, say it aloud

Gonna go clean your sh*t

If u peed to the floor, I make

you lick it clean, gotcha?

You can eat sh*t if you want.

Shut up!

Francis! Slience, Jean-Pierre!

They start barking when they hear

the doorbell or the phone

How are you, Grard?

Think you know my cousin Jos?

Yes, we have met.

- Nice jacket

In the beginning I was very happy

with your way of working

Are you happy yourself?

You trusted me allready in the

beginning, thanks for that

I hear you have been in contact

with the Ludo Daes' gang?

Yes, true

Heard you have done them

a few favors

And that they trust you fully

They don't trust me but they

trust you

This little kid gang that denied

business with me

And now they are doing well.

Guess, why...

Because you are in.

Can you believe it?

Go pay that house a small visit, -

You contact them and organize

us a little party

Smells too much like corpses here.

- Like the leaders ass?

I was just joking, nothing more

I respect you. You respect me and

my buddies, you hear, Aziz?

Yea, I hear. It was just a joke.

- Jean Mi said he will stop

Because I don't respect you guys?

- No, never

You gotta turn the cheese around

and prevent them from drying

This is a woman... not yours,

not his, a woman

It doesn't matter whose.

- Not even mine


You looking for a fight?

- Are you naked under your pants?

Are you coming over to my place?

Don't u feel like f***ing a bit?

- Are you really somekinda man?

Yes, I know you want Moussa

You like to lock up in your apartment...

- Go play with your friends

Are you pissed?

- Maybe

C'mon now

Buzz off or loose your balls...

You're great, I like you.

- Thanks. Go f*** yourself

F*** yourself. No-one has ever

spoken to me like that.

His stepfather raped her as a

kid and now she hates all men

She has turned you down too.

- No she hasn't

She is just so thin.

That's why let her be

Guess what, I owe you an apology

In the beginning when papa told that

I must take you with me, I was pissed

But now I'm happy that you are here,

it makes me feel alot more calm

If everything goes, fine and if we

want to organize -

f***ing competition? Good to know

that we have a pro here among us, -

one that allways carries a tissue

paper with him

Mr. Bergosa?

- Francis, stop nagging

It's not possible

I said, no weapons. Jos has a gun

Give him the phone

Do you have a gun?

Put it away you pisshead


What hse said?

- I gotta change

Do they want group sex with us?

Nice underwear

You must all be insane


- They know that I'm clean

No gun, no wires. They don't know

you. So wait there

Can't do... ok...

Grard Bdcarrax, my son,

Have you been promoted?

How are you, Georges?

- I'm fine. Talk to you later

Wait. Have you been checked?

I have been, and you?

Ok, all of you undress. If I find

even the smallest weapon, so no deal

Madame wants to know if you found

any weapons

Put everything overthere

Now that you shut up so let's stay

like that. Want something to drink?

Diet version, thanks

Damn what manners that guy's got

All of you undress. Show me your ass.

Now it's your turn

You too, f*ggot

Give it all to me.

What's taking so long?

Don't move or you bite the bullet

You are really starting to irritate

I don't mean the trouble that I can

get by you entering here

The money ain't mine. I hand em over.

- Yeah, that won't be a problem

How can you come to me with a

bullet in the leg?

I have been nursing you since you

were ten yeas old

Sometimes you woke me three o'clockin

the morning with your face in blood

And now a gun

Hear that mother...

- Your mother?

Can I call?

- There's a phone

Mr. Bergosa?

Everything went wrong.

- Do you have the cash?


- Come right over

I couldn't help Jos.

- I told you to come back

Mr. Bergosa?

- Still there?

Your dogs... they sleeping?

- Yes, sleeping

Do you know a quiet place where

i could hide for a while

Three, six months, only till the

situation settles a bit

Wake up all, work waiting

F***, that's abuse.

- Last one down cleans

I will clean u'r face in a bit f***er

All wake up...

You coming up there for the first time?

You will see that it's quiet there

I'll jump off there

But you won't make it for dinner.

- I bet your underwear for that, Gisle

There you are, f***ing.

Be nice now or...

We are serving rabbit on syrrup sauce.

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Submitted on August 05, 2018

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