Tin Men Page #4

GIL:

You musta seen him. He hangs

out with Carly Benelli, Cheese

... you know, that group.

TILLEY:

I don't know the guy.

(CONTINUED)

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GIL:

Don't you remember, he was up at

the Corral one night when we were

there... he's a good dancer. You

must have seen him.

TILLEY:

I don't know the guy.

SAM:

Gil, he doesn't know the guy.

GIL:

I thought he knew him, Sam... I

can't believe he doesn't know

him.

SAM:

He seems to be indicating that

he doesn't know him.

TILLEY:

I don't know the guy!

GIL:

He's a good dancer.

TILLEY:

What do you want me to do, date

him? What do I give a sh*t if

he's a good dancer?

GIL:

I thought you saw him. I was

amazed, he does a Marengay... I

tell you if I was a girl I'd be

impressed.

SAM:

You're not a girl and you're

impressed!

Florence comes over and puts down some coffee in front

of Tilley.

TILLEY:

Is it fresh?

FLORENCE:

Yes, it's fresh!

TILLEY:

Just asking, Florence.

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Florence starts to walk away.

FLORENCE:

You're always just asking.

Gil still talking about BB.

GIL:

I'm telling you, you just can'tbelieve how well this guy doesthe Marengay.

MOUSE:

I can't wait to see it.

TILLEY:

I'll tell you one thing, when Iget a hold of this guy, I'llbreak both his legs and then hewon't dance the Marengay toogood.

CUT TO:

18 EXT. INDUSTRIAL PARK IN A RUN-DOWN AREA OF TOWN - DAY18

We see BB pulling up to a building in his banged-up,

brand new Cadillac. There are three or four nice

Cadillacs parked outside of the run-down building.

CUT TO:

19 INT. OFFICE - DAY 19

The office is filled with second-hand furniture, mismatched

desks and a conglomeration of styles. In one

corner of the room there are two or three GIRLS workingthe telephones -- canvassing -- talking to people on thephone to see if they're interested in a demonstration onthe benefits of aluminum siding. They all speak in avery congenial tone of voice.

GIRL #1

Good morning, I represent theSuperior Aluminum Siding Company.

We will have a representativein your neighborhood today.

Would you be interested in seeingthe benefits of our aluminum

product?

(MORE)

(CONTINUED)

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GIRL #1 (CONT'D)

(beat)

Yes... well, we do aluminum siding

which improves the appearance of

your house, and improves the

insulation...

CAMERA MOVES TO ANOTHER GIRL.

GIRL #2

... Which improves the appearance

of your house, and improves the

insulation...

CAMERA MOVES TO GIRL #3.

GIRL #3

... Superior Aluminum Siding

Company. We will have a

representative...

CAMERA MOVES TO another corner of the room where we see

4 "tin men" salesmen sitting around one of the desks

playing cards. MOE is beginning to tell a joke. He is

a man in his 50's.

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