The very loud sound of people having sex. The sounds of deep
moaning and sexual huffs and puffs. After a few seconds the
sound grows even louder. It should sound as if the two people
are fucking into a microphone. The sounds should be painful
Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes, oh yes.
INT. BEDROOM - DAY .
The face of a very pretty young girl with long blond hair.
Her face is inches from the CAMERA, the CAMERA is above her,
looking down, almost like the POV of the person she's having
sex with. She id breathing extremely heavily; her face is red-
hot and sweaty. Every time she moves, she makes a deep
moaning noise. She looks likes she's on the verge of pain and
Oh yes, Telly it hurts, oh yes, oh
yes, please Telly, Telly. .
The CAMERA backs up to reveal Telly having sex with the girl.
Telly is seventeen years old. He is short, dirty, slightly
muscular, he has an interesting face, he is a street-smart
punk, He is biting his bottom lip, the two of them are
sweating like mad, the sound of the bed post smashing against
the wall combines with the rhythmical moaning of the two.
RAPID FADE TO BLACK
BACK IN TIME - BEFORE THEY HAD SEX
Telly is in bed with the girl. The two of them are sitting up
in the big bed that is raised high of the ground. Telly is .
naked except for a tight pair of white underwater. He is
sitting above the blankets with his legs spread apart. The
girl is partially covered, she is wearing a black bra, one of
her nipples is poking through. The two of them are very
sweaty, they both have messed up hair, there is a great
feeling of heat and wetness.
The windows to her room are open, the sound of outside of
outside traffic is circulating. There is a small fan on her
dresser that is blowing from side to side. Socks, shirts, and
pants are lying on her hard wood floor. The room is neat
except for the clothing. A large poster of the Beastie Boys
hangs on the wall.
She has many stuffed animals on her bed and dresser drawer,
she also has a small dollhouse in the corner.
Telly and the girl are looking at each other.
The girl speaks slowly and softly, she has a very innocent
beauty about her.
You know what I want to do?
What do I want to do?
You want to fuck me. But you can't
Because, you know why. You know.
Because your a virgin?
Because I'm a virgin and I don't
want no baby.
You think I want a baby? When
you're with me, you don't have to
worry about that kinda stuff.
Why is that?
Because I like you. I think you're
beautiful. I think if we fucked you
would love it. You wouldn't even
I wouldn't believe it?
I don't know. I just think that you
would love it.
But, I don't know. I'm just scared
that things would change. Between
What things? I'm telling you,
nothing's going to change.
(he begins to caress her
cheek and hair)
I want to make you happy. That's
Telly scoots up to the girl and starts to kiss her. He sticks
his tongue in her mouth. They kiss.
You know it won't hurt. I'll be
gentle. I promise.
Do you care about me?
Of course I do.
RAPID CUT TO BLACK
AN EXTREME CLOSEUP OF THE GIRL'S FACE
As she screams in total agony. Telly and the girl are on the
bed having sex. All the lights are on. This scene should look
very white and bleached out, very electric and shocking.
Everything should be exposed as Telly takes advantage of the