70 min

I'm willing to listen!

Well... Sorry, maybe it's nonsense.

So there are these three disappearances.

I've been thinking about these.

The disappearances were

notified on 5th January,

on the 23rd April and on the 24th August.

Maybe there's no direct

connection at all because

they disappeared in different

parts of the country.

If we read documents,

environmental studies...

I read the police records...

And I've noticed some common motives.


All three missing persons are women.

21, 28 and 42 years olds.

And the other strange thing...

They missing since the holidays.

After New Year, Easter and August holidays.

And we know where they started.

Two women traveled far,

but the third divorced

woman could have visited

her relatives who live in other towns.

And one of them... Interests me specially.


- Thanks!

- May I?

- Please!

This is the town where

the first woman started.

We know her destination.

She went to a mountainous village

in the northeast where she works.

If I want to get from

the town to this place,

I choose two ways.

But for my part I'd prefer

to ride on the main road.

- And why?

- Because in January was a big snow

and the main road has already been cleaned.

Bravo! Go on!

The third woman was going from southeast

to north on 24th August.

And if they arrived where they wanted to go

then here or here... their paths

have crossed each other.

Gedeon, you always fantasize!

- But I suppose that...

- What?

One of them should have

travelled in January,

the other woman should have

travelled in August... But it's not true.

And their cars were found some

kilometres away where they started.

Yes, in that position what I said before.

The divorced woman's car who's

disappeared after Easter was smashed.

The other two cars were all right.

Yes... And?

I just thought that their paths

should have crossed each other.

There are many similarities

and should be a common motive,

a common solution.

And I think, this will be...

What do you think?

I couldn't tell you exactly.

But they always disappeared

after the holidays.

And now there is a holiday again.

What if a lonely woman

is going anywhere now?

And she is passing through this area.

Man, it's not a Bermuda Triangle!

This is the middle of a

civilized, european country.

But if I look at the results of

the investigation... You're right.

But the phantasmagories

don't move this case forward.

Only the determined, consistent work.

Well, what is your suggestion, Gedeon?

I think, one police woman should drive

in this neighborhood on holidays.

- Driving alone, right?

- I'll hide in the car.

And what do you expect to come

of this? Ehh, what a rubbish!

A woman is your bait. Oh, come on! Don't

believe everything you see in the movies.

- I thought you will not allow that.

- No, of course not.

Your daddy wouldn't be proud of you.

But I have another suggestion.

So the solution must be here.

And the situation is the same

The holiday.

For this reason I ask you

to let's take over the area

and check everyone.

First of all the lonely women

who come this way.

Maybe we can find something...

- What?

Hmm, I don't know.

Listen, Gedeon!

There's a concrete tube.

And there are two cats in it.

Why can they not see each other?

Because it's dark.

It's not dark.

- Because that's a curved tube.

- No.

Because the cats are

there in other moments.

So that's the problem with your theory.

- But boss...

- No!... Thank you for your effort.

- But if I...

- It's not your job.

- We'll never find out what happened

to these women. - We're doing everything!

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