Black Butterfly Page #5
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- Year:
- 2017
- 93 min
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He's got a...
A date with a pretty girl.
But today is not gonna
be his lucky day.
He gets into it with some
pissed off truck driver
looking for trouble,
who frightens off the girl
and then gets into a fight
with the writer.
So for sure, this writer's
gonna get his ass kicked.
But then a stranger intervenes
and, uh, helps him out.
So the writer is driving
and he sees this stranger
walking along the road,
so, naturally, he pulls over
and gives the guy a lift.
The writer and the
stranger start talking
and the writer offers
the stranger some work
'cause he feels sorry for him.
But even then,
he's kinda concerned
'cause he doesn't
know who this guy is.
I mean, he could be anybody.
So by the time they
get to the house,
the writer's already beginning
to regret his offer-
no, no, no.
It's not like this.
Paul.
It's just a story.
Yeah.
Eh, it's a good start.
Go on.
You're the writer, man.
You write it.
But you gotta be committed.
Okay, sure, yeah.
When do you think
you'll be done?
Who said you could
read the script?
Why not?
Because I'm still
working on it.
You can't read this.
It's called a work
in progress, you know?
That's not the problem.
This story, the way it happens,
it's too easy.
- Too easy?
- Mm-hmm.
- It's exactly what happened.
- Really?
Are you sure about that?
he's just some guy standing
at the counter of a diner.
But what do we really
know about him?
What do we know?
You know, maybe, uh,
you know, maybe he
was partnered up
with the truck
driver who barged in.
Maybe they
worked it out in advance,
Jack and the truck driver.
You know, they said,
"when this guy comes in,
Then I'll come in, save his ass,
and he'll be
eternally grateful. "
And later, in the parking lot,
what Jack whispers in his ear,
is, uh, "thanks, buddy.
Now he's mine. "
Then Jack takes
off down the road.
And then later the
writer's driving home,
so what does he do?
I mean, he wants
to be a nice guy,
so he offers him work-
so if, if Jack
had some kind of, uh,
relationship with the
truck driver, that,
that would be very interesting.
I mean...
You're the writer, right?
- Yeah.
should come back into the story,
towards the end.
I have a better
ending in mind.
Hard to speak
a single word, isn't it?
That's where your script fails.
That was the only
way to show you.
The woman on the
run in your script,
she's about to have
her throat slit.
What the f***? And you have her
pleading with him.
If she reacted
like you just did,
that would be realistic.
I just wanted to
show you some real.
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