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The door opens and their boss, RAEFORD DUNNE, pokes hishead in. He is as anxious as Vince and Nelson about this

account.

DUNNE:

How's my dream team?

locked up?

Got it

Sure, chief.

some -NELSON

Just finessing

VINCE:

Minor details. Minor.

11A INT. JABE AND DUNNE - ART DEPARTMENT - DAY 11A

Nelson and Vince are walking into an art department.

VINCE:

Can't wait to show you theseboards -- I mean, they came outgreat, perfect. The best work

I've ever done -- of course with

your help -(

pauses)

Client's gonna love 'em.

By now they are inside the room and Nelson is quicklysurveying a set of storyboards which we don't see. He

jabs a finger as he indicates each one, all business.

NELSON:

Make this night.

Nelson -VINCE

NELSON:

Give me a bonfire.

VINCE:

Nelson, stop -NELSON

Make this three quarter.

(points to anotherboard)

Nastier. Give me more cleavage,

more dogs -VINCE

Nelly -- stop, stop, stop!

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Just then, Beatrice enters the room, relieved to find

Nelson there.

BEATRICE:

There you are. Did you forgetyour one o'clock at the D.M.V.?

Sort of.

NELSON:

Reschedule.

BEATRICE:

The deadline to renew is today.

NELSON:

So let it expire.

BEATRICE:

It was expired when you got theticket. That's why you have to go.

NELSON:

Beatrice, I don't have time for

this. Wait till the

presentation's over...

BEATRICE:

If you don't renew today, they'llsuspend your license, which meansthe next time you get pulled over,

they can throw you in jail. And I

bet you don't have time for that,

either.

A hush falls over the room.

VINCE:

Nobody beats the D.M.V., Nels.

Not even you.

12 INT. DMV - DAY 12

Nelson is in hell. The "appointments" line is endless,

and a BABY behind him is SCREAMING. Checking his watch,

Nelson is scribbling more copy in a notebook as theBABY'S PITCH climbs HIGHER.

13 INT. DMV - TEST ROOM - DAY 13

Annoyed beyond belief, Nelson waits as a PROCTOR passesout tests to a room full of random San Franciscans.

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PROCTOR:

There'll be no talking, eating,ordrinking. If your personalhygiene becomes a distraction,

you will be asked to leave -

Running late, SARA (25), stumbles into the room. At the

same time, the paper bag in her arms ruptures, spilling amotley assortment of groceries. She gets down on herhands and knees starts picking them up, reaches for asalami log under Nelson's chair...

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