The Raking

Synopsis: As part of a Cultural Anthropology Project, several college students embark on a weekend camping trip to research an urban-legend, The Rake. The Rake is a terrifying monster, in humanoid form with long claws. The creature feeds only on the Equinox, which also happens to be the same time the college students take their camping trip. As the college students explore deeper and deeper into the desert to chase down the myth, and disprove of it's existence, they find themselves no longer the hunters of mystery, but the prey of The Rake itself. Now they find themselves fighting for their very lives.
Genre: Horror
Director(s): Bryan Brewer
  6 wins.
97 min

[eerie music ]

[woman screaming]

[crickets chirping]

You're seriously

not gonna say anything?

What do you want me to say?

I already said I was sorry.

Well, sorry isn't enough!

Then what would be enough, huh?

You know what?

Forget it.

Look, I don't wanna fight.


Can you just tell me

what you want me to do?

What? You honestly

don't know what to do?!

If I honestly knew,

I wouldn't have

just asked you right now!

[sighs with exasperation]

[Woman] I asked you 20 minutes

ago to stop for directions.

[Man] And I already told you

I know where I'm going.


I just wanna go home.


I know.

[exasperated sigh]



What did you do?

I didn't do anything.

Jesus, George,

you have to be kidding me

We are in the middle of nowhere.

Thank you, Carla. Thank you

for telling me the obvious.

This is so typical.

Look. It was a mistake, okay?

I forgot, you don't make those,

do you?

That is so unfair!

Look. I don't want to fight.

I don't want to fight either.

I just wanna go home.


What was that?!

- [George] I don't know.

- [Child] Mommy!

- George, wait.

- [Child] Mommy? Daddy?

- Wait. I'm scared.

Hey, every-everything's okay.

Did you have a good birthday?

- Yeah.

- Yeah?


[Carla screams]

Okay, okay.

Just stay in the car.

Stay in the car.

Be careful!

[suspenseful music ]

[Carla, distraught]

Hey, it's okay.

It's okay, it's okay, honey.

Don't worry.

[Carla whimpering]

What'd you see?

What is it?

Did you see anything?!

- [George] No!



[coyote noises]

[Carla gasps]


[rasping roar]

Oh, my God!

Give me the flashlight

outta the glovebox!

- Okay. Okay.

- Now! Come on!

Here! Here!

[ghastly roar]

[George cries out]

[Carla screaming]

Oh, my God!

[panicked breathing]

[child crying]


[tense music ]

[panicked breathing]

[low growl]



[ghastly roar]

[Carla screams]


Oh, my God.



Oh, my God.


I'm sorry!


Oh, God!

Come on! Come on!


[Carla cries out]

[Carla screams]

[crunching sounds]









[child cries]

[low growl]

[Child whimpers]

[Child crying out]


[Child gasps]

[ghastly roar]

[Child crying]

[crying continues]

[crying fades]

[eerie distorted noise]

[ghastly cry]

[intense spooky music ]

[music fades]

[up-tempo guitar music ]

[breathing deeply,

kissing loudly]



Maybe we shouldn't, you know...


[rock music ]

[woman moaning]

[cries of pleasure]


[contented sigh]

So now do I get an A?

That was clearly

a B performance.


Get dressed.


Oh, my God.

Thank you.

[music stops]

You could give it a chance.

I'll tell you what.

I'll give country music a chance

if you let me get out

of doing this year's

lame finals project.


You know I can't give you

special treatment.

[gentle music ]

I'm sorry. I know you

hate it when I touch it.

I don't hate it, just...

I dunno, I-I can't explain it.

It's okay. I get it.

What's this?

Happy birthday.

My birthday's not 'til tomorrow.

I know, I just...

I couldn't wait.

Thank you.

Wait, maybe you should

open it tomorrow.




Are you disappointed?

Oh, you never disappoint.

[handle rattles]

[loud pounding on the door]


- She's such a buzzkill!

[Girl outside]


Kennedy, open the door!

- Uh...

- [Girl outside] Come on!

I can hear you in there!

I'm a little busy!

F*ck you!

It's my room, too!

I need my charger!

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