Luen oi chor gor (Love at First Note)



Get up.

It's late.

You have an early interview.

I'll go buy breakfast.

Five dollars.

Good morning.

Buying buns?

What else?

I've to go. See you.

See you.

Five dollars.

Dad, get up!

Interview at 10.

What time is it?

Too late... I'll go next time.

You'll get there on time.

No... next time.

Come on.

Don't force me.

I'm not.

But... don't be like this.

Leave me alone.

You've been drunk for 5 years since mom died.

Shut up!

I'm your dad!

You don't bother me, I don't bother you.

Mind you own business, OK?

Let me sleep.


Let me sleep, OK?

Good morning, mom.

Good morning, son.

God! Forgot the breakfast.

I got it.

Love you!

Excuse me.


Do you have Gary Numan's LP?

Out of stock.

New shipment comes next month...

Not so expensive.


Leave your number, I'll call you.


See you. See you.

Did you notice that guy...

...came in with his girlfriend?


She carried the bag for the guy!

What then?

They are lovers!

And you ask for his number?

Not funny.

It's funny... you fool.

I'm going out.

Why's he staying in the toilet so often?

Mind your own business! No work for you?

Yes! I just delivered stuff and trop by...

He... handsome?

Wide body, narrow face...

thick neck. Too much exercise!

Do you have Barry Manilow?


I already have this.



We only accept Visa...


There're good stuff like Donny Osmond...

...over there.

They sound better with vinyl.

What did I say? Donny Osmond is good.

Don't mind him. He's a fool.

Spoiled brat.

What's with you?

Black card isn't for cheap things!

It's for getting a sailboat.

He's a little bit too much.

Still using his dad's card.

Do you've an appointment?

Tony Wong, 4.

Room A.


Take these to the client tomorrow.

Study if you're free.

Get you a diploma and find a good job.

Don't bother me.

I'm telling you what's right.

Making music is not buying sex.

What did you say?

Have you done that?

For these, can you earn much?


How much?

A $1,000 each.

How many for a month?

A few.

That's good?

Don't lie.

A few for a year.

Good... you can feed yourself with it.


learn to eat one meal per week.


I did my job.

Kei, I'm not forcing you.

I don't want you to be me.

Cheap clothes cost only $10.

Rich ones go for big designers.

We can do alternation today.

Years later, we may have nothing to do.



Really sure?



Miss Yong.

Is my dress done?

Not yet... you said tomorrow.

No, I need it tonight!

Sorry. I'll do it now.

How long?

I'll take it then.

OK. Sorry.

She did say tomorrow.

Let it be.

We can't anger them.

It's disastrous if they don't come.

Stubborn and impolite.

I can't help her.

Be good...

be strong for yourself, understand?

Why must we take it?

That's why I told you to find a better job.




Where're you going so late?

Run errand.

What's that?

Real quick.

I won't get in.

Why's that?

I don't like it.

Why don't we get in?

Didn't you say no?

Women have many faces.

Oh yeah? Change your face

into Ayumi Hamasaki's.

Or try Kyoko Fukada's, you fool?

Stop annoying me!

Not too many faces.

Are we game tonight?

Let's game. You choose.

That one.

That one? Easy!

Jack, your doomed.

The black widow.

She's yours.

No problem. I'm Jack Ming.

Born to be loved!

Martin, yours.


Quincy, you get that one.


It's set.

The ones who can't get the gal here...

will be punished... Drink it up!

Make it more exciting.

Drink it like a dog! Great!

Wait here.

You finished?


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