Loitering with Intent Page #4

Synopsis: Two male actors/close friends want to jumpstart their careers. They end up making a big shot producer think that they have a hot script that everyone wants to get their hands on. The 2 men then drive to upstate New York and hole up in a family member's country home- with 10 dedicated days to write said script. Dominic and Raphael then get derailed by a beautiful gardener, Ava and Dominic's sister, Gigi. Both women appear at the house, which was supposed to be serene enough to focus on the task at hand. But to add to the problems, Gigi's boyfriend Wayne arrives, still suffering from PTSD, and his brother Devon as well, creating even more havoc. A looming deadline and complicated personal histories create scenes that are humorous and emotional.
Genre: Comedy, Drama
Director(s): Adam Rapp
Production: Metal Rabbit Media
  1 nomination.
 
IMDB:
4.6
Metacritic:
49
Rotten Tomatoes:
31%
NOT RATED
Year:
2014
80 min
44 Views


Put down the hand sanitizer

and get a little messy.

Gonna feel like a tarantula.

What the f*** was that?

Gigi!

Oh, my God, what are you doing here?

Are you okay? Are you all right?

Gigi, what're you...

Have you been drinking?

Have you...

You're wasted!

Gi...

Raphael!

Raphael.

- Raphael.

- Gigi!

What are you doing for fun these days?

I don't know, stranger, what have

you been doing for fun these days.

Think we owe each other

about three happy new years.

- She drove here drunk.

- Oh, give it a rest!

I didn't drive anywhere. I stopped

for a second or something.

Can't you see she needs

taking care of, Dominic?

Aw you!

You are in tune.

You simply tune in.

You always have.

Gigi!

My little darling!

Bring 'em more water please. The

last thing I want... Okay, wow.

Splish, splash, I feel fantastic!

Dom, you wanna get in there

and make it a family affair?

I'm so happy we're all

here. It's wide open.

You guys have known

each other a while, right?

Yeah.

- Raphael was her boyfriend, sort of.

- What do you mean, sort of?

Whatever they were.

That was way back.

Hey!

Yes, it's true. Raph was

my boyfriend, sort of.

Speaking of, where's Wayne?

Don't mention Wayne, no no,

don't mention Wayne.

Why not, why?

What happened now?

He has some nerve.

That's all I'll say.

Raph and I have a lotta work

to do tonight so we might have...

Not a bubble bath without some bubbly.

Yes!

- Please man.

- Why are you people ruining my life?

Because I love it when

a man brings me champagne!

The honey is flowing in all directions!

Yeah, get up. Let's go. We're leaving.

- What are you doing?

- I'm leaving.

- Why?

- Why do you think?

Dominic. Dominic!

- What?

- I was losing my mind!

You can't leave, I practically crashed the car

into the house last night. I drove drunk.

I don't have time for this.

I don't have time.

Get off!

I don't wanna be alone right now.

Well I do!

- G, stop it.

- Why can't you stay?

- Because, I need to focus!

- So focus!

It's a really big house.

- Do you like that?

- I need you! I might be at the end of a rope.

Fine, all right, I'll stay!

Savage!

- Gorilla.

- P*ssy!

What's up with my brother,

what are you feeding him?

Roast turkey and Miles Davis of course.

Had a dream about you last night, G.

That sounds promising.

You were telling me you wanted to

sell your shadow for 60 dollars.

- I could get more than 60 bucks.

- I bet you could.

Hey would you mind reading this with me?

I'm tired of my shadow

pinpointing exactly where I am.

I'm not sure that I follow.

I want to be rid of it.

It's not that simple, lady.

Neither am I.

There's no turning back, you understand?

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